Saturday, 28 March 2015

Draft 2: Target Audience Feedback

Sophie Devlin, 15
"I love the idea of showing the overhead shot of the map, but it is difficult to make out what is actually on the phone screen. Also the black screen in between Amber looking at the person in the tree and then lying on the floor again should be longer. Overall I loved it - well done!!"

Krystian Noga, 18
"Definitely fits the theme of supernatural horror! However, the emotions of the characters weren't communicated clearly enough. Also, the font choice was good but some of the titles were on top of the faces of the characters which I think should be avoided."

No comments:

Post a Comment