- the music and the sound effects do not relate well to our sub-genre or to what's happening on screen
- the titles were illegible and were not timed well
- the narrative was not communicated well/ was difficult to understand
In our next draft we will...
- have relevant sound effects and music
- have more legible titles which relate to our sub-genre
- have a clearer storyline (and will not have missing shots so it makes sense!)
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