Sunday, 1 March 2015

Draft 1: Target Audience Feedback

Gelsomina De Lucia, 18
"The music was not relevant to what was going on, also the titles were really difficult to read with the timings, colours and fonts. However I loved how it was non linear."


Darren Marshall, 15
"What I thought went well was the idea of a flashback to tell the story, but the story line wasn't very clear - I was confused as to what was going on."

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