Alternations Along The Way...

Alternations from draft 1 - 3.

Draft One:

• Set on a driveway/path and a graveyard.
• The props we used were red eye contact lenses and we had also planned on using a sign which read 'GRAVEYARD', however we were unable to get hold of one or make one in time. 
• The main character was quite scared and wary while her friends were more confident and were the ones who went into the graveyard first. 
• We used a flash transition to try and show the idea of a flashback.

Draft Two:

• Also set in the graveyard but rather than using the main driveway/path outside we re-located to a smaller one nearer to the actual cemetery. 
• We used the same prop of the red contact lenses but also had a mobile phone in this draft too. We changed the idea of showing a sign for the graveyard. 
• The main character, Amber, was now the confident one and it was her friend who was scared. 
• We changed the flash transition to a dissolve transition as this portrayed a flashback better.

Draft Three:

• Again, we kept our location the same as draft two (path and graveyard)
• Same props - red eye contacts and the mobile phone were used.
• Costumes, were changed a little this time. Amber wore a leather jacket to show her rebelliousness.
• Again, it was the main character who was the brave and confident one while her friend was scared.
• We kept the same dissolve transition to portray a flashback.
• We included more shots to convey the character's emotions more clearly.